Thursday, March 3, 2011

Godsend Comments

Rating: 3.5

We meet people each day.
Some just cleave to us never going away,
Some just impress us we pray they stay
Always and forever till our hair is grey.
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Dave Dafes
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Louis Cecile 07 March 2011

Interesting piece. The beginning seemed slightly to focused on rhyming, but the last few verses really strengthened the poem.

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Rekha Mandagere 07 March 2011

Great belief! Nice sentiments. Great! Thanks for sharing it.

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Ughelli, Delta State Nigeria
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