Monday, August 17, 2009

Gods Without Chariots. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wherefore the searcher today cries
To heaven for enlightened vision,
The eternal - - - 'Who am I '?
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Fay Slimm
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''The flame of eternal truth, once lit Can never go out'.' - thats God for you.. hey fay.. yet you are to write sometime i do not find right...

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 22 August 2009

am i....yes i am...what depth and wisdom in tis poem...lovely..it goes into my favs

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Bob Blackwell 19 August 2009

Fay, all that experience, knowledge and love have given you a wonderful and wise vision of what life is. 'Sincere people like you, do not seek to impress the world, but only to express themselve honestly.' Love Bob 10+++

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Bob Gibson 17 August 2009

The road of life is long, and crossroads there are many temptations abound along the way, those are ten a penny the narrow path is not lit, you may falter along the way trust in your own belief, then you will see the light of day

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Ernestine Northover 17 August 2009

Now this is cleverly written Fay, and put together with a sharp mind. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this one, it is a one off. Excellently produced. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Rakesh Bedi 17 August 2009

Fro duality to Oneness; a good thought, fay! In fact, it triggers on a strange numbness in mind.

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Catrina Heart 17 August 2009

amazing meaningful composition...a discovery of self from Who I am to I am in God's hands...10+++++++

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