baby dont be shy
you are soo fly
you make me feel a if i was high
so high in the sky that
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It is nice to read a love poem from a young man's perspective. I thought the reference to flying as high as the angels was very creative. This was a simple poem. It had some good rhyme in it. I thought it had the best ending a love poem can have, of course. All in all, a good effort and a clean clear poem. GW62
awww, soooo sweet, it made me feel all bubbly inside!