Gods Carpet Comments

This is quite imaginative and lovely. I could picture the Top Guy above pacing up and down in dispair and wearing his carpet thin! Like all true poets, the images you create simply get into one's mind and seem to find a cozy place there to cuddle up.

'There's to many holes in gods carpet' yes yet hard to believe, war started in heaven then spread to earth, war started in heaven which we perceive to be paradise is a hard to believe contradiction in concept; the easiest place to start mending holes would be mending holes nearest too us, taking holes in our stride.

Seeing the wonders of nature! ! Thanks for sharing.

You have done a very nice comparison. Nice concept. Keep dropping such gems.

For the stars are but Gods footprints in the sky which shines through the holes of our making, your passion for poetry is a wonderful thing to observe my friend, never stop reaching for more.

Beautiful image and a fine sentiment too. Really love this poem.

i TOLD God to not buy at the 'Discount Carpet Center! ! ! i like the image of 'stars' being light shining from Heaven-Central, through holes in carpeting. i read a poem on PH not too long ago about 'rain'(?) being drops from Heavenly leaking plumbing. was that your poem also? i don't think so. bri :))

Great poem, your work is growing so much and I love the direction you are taking. I hope one day your sentiments come true and we can finally have a world full of peace and light.