Wednesday, November 30, 2005

Gods And Mosquito's Comments

Rating: 4.3

Quietly I sit in meditation

A mosquito descends
landing on my arm
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Ray Lucero
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Brian Jani 28 June 2014

Powerful command of words.i like this poem.well done Ray

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Moya Levy 25 March 2006

Ooooh Ray! Then I take it you are not of a buddhist persuasion? ! I aways imagine something a little more exciting than a splat anyway, if a god was to destroy our world. Perhaps something with explosions - you know a little colourful! Moyax

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Shannon Chapel 05 December 2005

Ray, I freaking hate mosquitos! lol Having been born and raised in Alaska I am very familiar with them. They are, after all, the state bird. lol Well done. S

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