Sunday, October 29, 2006

Godman Comments

Rating: 5.0

His visage is that of a bristling sardine.
His suit the impression of wet scales.
His mouth draws rushing currents of air
across hidden guilt slits.
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George Murdock
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John Kay 10 November 2006

Brother George...good to see you back. I love the first line. What a slime. Good work. John

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Nimal Dunuhinga 08 November 2006

Excellent! I see the greatest Jesus Christ and all his hardships through this naked Godman.

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Patti Masterman 30 October 2006

Excellent and really needed to be said. These tv pulpits remind me of a bad halloween movie, really. I love the allusion to gills, and a slithering reference would have worked nicely too?

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