Goddess Comments

Um...can somebody please pass the squeegee? It's gettin' a bit steamy in here. Shannon

short, simple and sensual! I liked the fact that it is unfinished.. it leaves a lot to the reader's imagination doesn't it? ! HBH

This does present a certain mood and feeling. Very provacative.

This is concise and very focused, Uriah. Beautiful image. Raynette

Damn! Is it getting hot in here?

Very sweet and sensual....

Uriah, an evocative piece. The title drew me in and I was not sure what to expect. This is a short departure from your usual style. Nevertheless it is delivered with more than enough aplomb. Excellent. Truly evocative.

Hmm....somebody's in a great mood! Very nice Uriah! You do have a way of creating a mood with your poems. Sincerely, Mary