Thursday, December 27, 2007

Goddess Of Yodeling Mermaids And Fire-Eating Pelicans Comments

Rating: 4.9

Beneath the crescent moon
she dances the tarantella
with mammoth Martian crabs
of Burracho Beach.
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David Kowalczyk
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Mark Mywords 04 January 2008

I loved the contrasting imagery between 'veils of electric sand' and 'the leaden world' in the first or second stanza.

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Ward Rasmussen 03 January 2008

I want to meet this goddess of yours. Do you have her phone number?

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David Kowalczyk

David Kowalczyk

Batavia, New York
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