Thursday, September 11, 2008

Goddess In Love Comments

Rating: 4.9

Athena, when you saved us with Hercules
from the Stymphalides Fowls, you wanted other things.
Neither honours, nor hecatombs.
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Joseph S. Josephides
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Ashraful Musaddeq 01 October 2008

Marvelous job is done on myth. Love it.10+

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Tess Rockenstire 30 September 2008

Love the greek mythology the god and the goddeses...and you penned this was one nicely. You are inspiring writer...thanks. Tess

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Sadiqullah Khan 27 September 2008

Greek my thology, stories of love and war, all mix up with true colors of nature, modern by alll respects, , the Goddess has also a heart and the nature be loved, , , , a lovely write so different, , a 10

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rohit sapra 24 September 2008

This poem is well expressed. In my view right to love is essential for everyone even if they are gods or godesses.

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Tsira Goge 23 September 2008

...mix bleu and yellow to synthesize the green of hope, mingle tin and the copper to admire a statue of bronze. Even a goddess has the right to love with a woman’s heart... ....................................................................................... Joseph, Good poems, I very much liked yours 'colour of hope'... It is easy to write verses, when on a palm the Greek mythology... But modern synthesis some 'values' very in an original way looks... Best wishes, Tsira

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Donna Nimmo 23 September 2008

I love this one, so full of passion and feeling. How very romantic. Hugs, Donna

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Ency Bearis 23 September 2008

compound welded with love...legendary of love solidified...a nice composition... con amor propio... Ency Bearis

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Anjali Sinha 23 September 2008

sir, such a super duper you have left me ' speechless, on the loopholes, thirsty though at the fontana amorosa.' ++++++10 regards anjali

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Anjali Sinha 23 September 2008

sir, such a super duper you have left me ' speechless, on the loopholes, thirsty though at the fontana amorosa.' ++++++10 regards anjali

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Ershad Mazumder 22 September 2008

Super excellant piece. But it should be more poetic and soft.Still I like it.

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Caterpillar MC 22 September 2008

'mix bleu and yellow to synthesize the green of hope, mingle tin and the copper to admire a statue of bronze.' Beautiful expression, a very nice read. Thank you for sharing.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 21 September 2008

Let us confess to live in harmony with the nature, mix bleu and yellow to synthesize the green of hope, mingle tin and the copper to admire a statue of bronze. as if the golden verse from the apostle of peace wakes the mininons from the rock of bed raising the voices of love and peace by nature i simply stand and stare when speechless...............really wonderful story of truth by the imagery, supebly narrated by the legends, great write,10+++, thanks for sharing

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Indira put her finger on the right word: spellbound. Erudite, intelligent, eloquent. t x

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I agree with Indira.. i love it!

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Indira Babbellapati 15 September 2008

i was spell bound after reading the poem...i forgot to breath is no exaggeration...

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