Goddess Comments

One poem is in dialogue with another. In Must I Not Write? he invokes beautiful things that command him to write. In this poem, after a festival of much prayer, he calls on himself to be unrepentant, to begin a new cycle of living. He rejects the thirst to neutralize all world-weariness with prayer. Walking like a cat along a narrow line of truth, he wants to accept all colors that the world can throw at him: dark and brooding or bright and delicate.

Prayers are indefatigible thirst to calm down monotony of all forms- of living. and we will surrender to myriad hues catacombs of vastness hammering the body in spaces. very good ideas and notions. imagination. tony

it's a fantastic poem, welll- composed, surely Goddess willl bless everyone, and departing time is really painful, your intense feeling is well-expressed, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comment.

Yeah with immersion of deity the festivities have ended. Goddess has given her blessing to us. Let us start fresh and do good for man kind. Nice write.