Goddess Comments

You could not serve a goddess better than you do through this poem. The ballad stanza form is the ideal form for a poem which seems to be about a legendary figure. But if your poem is really a love poem to a real person being praised as a goddess, it still is a declaration of total affection, almost a surrender to the beloved. But as I read it I thought of a third possibility: it is a love poem of a poet addressed to the MUSE, that mysterious figure who blesses us poets with inspiration when we show her proper devotion.

Absolutely Beautiful. Your words reach my very heart and soul. I can feel the love expessed here