Monday, December 3, 2018

God- You Are The One Comments

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Going through the heaps of pain,
I found the support of your hands.
Before my efforts fall in drain,
on your mercy I always depend.
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Abhipsa, lovely poem. Faith heals us of all ills! Keep it up, dear poet

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Chinedu Dike 24 November 2019

Well articulated and nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. A beautiful creation crafted with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing.

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Abhipsa Panda 24 November 2019

Thank you sir for your nice comments

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 January 2019

We all live in GOD'S hands and MERCY PEACE SO BE WITH EACH YOUR lovely comment brought me here do read my MOM'S SMILES O POETESS DEAR YOU will adore of that I am sure poet me

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Jazib Kamalvi 02 January 2019

Very impressive write, Abhipsa. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Mihaela Pirjol 06 December 2018

The bitter-sweet lament of an aching heart... which time and God will surely heal. A heart-warming poem.

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Abhipsa Panda 24 November 2019

Thanks mam for getting time to read my poem and commenting on that

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 05 December 2018

A wonderful poem that captures deep faith in God. This piece resonates with me.When we have nothing but only pain and hardship, I find solace and support in God Almighty. Thank you, Abhipsa for this wonderful offering. Indeed, a deep affirmation of our faith in God. Beautifully crafted and well executed write.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2018

Message from Divine

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2018

Message from Divine read it fine

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2018

be pragmatic poet all is poetry YES BELIEVE IN GOD BUT ACT FIRST NO ONE WILL BE THEN AT THAT MOMENT god will be in heaven at a far off distance unknown but WITH YOU READ SADLY PAPERS DAILY WHAT CAN ANYONE else DO.. SO HELP YOURSELF Thanks u inspired me I just posted a poetry do read and comment up on it kindly poetess

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 04 December 2018

GOD says you are no less keep hidden an iron rod and chillies in your breast hit him below and leave to me the rest Then YOU I will as I only can do from the distance where live you BLESS I confess and profess God keep me in your heart AND like a bold woman chop his off then I as God will show you off as courageous Be bold be not afraid gain confidence the world has changed.Don't just rely on me defy the evil sinner deal with him

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Dr Antony Theodore 03 December 2018

How strong is the telepathy, why don't others feel as you do? Why not others having sympathy? can't they see my pain with your view. telepathy, curiosity, clarity, dignity, purity. so many key words i write which affected me as i read this poem on positiveness. write, write dear poetess. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

Thank you sir for reading and appreciating my lines and motivating me to write more

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2018

When one get much pain and doesn't get any alternatives he or she prays God, the almighty. This theme has been so touchingly and astutely inscribed in this beautiful poem. I cite....Going through the heaps of pain, I found the support of your hands. / Before my efforts fall in drain, / on your mercy I always depend. Thank you dear Abhipsa for sharing this gem. Full vote.

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

I am really very grateful to you sir for your kind words for my work

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Ramesh T A 03 December 2018

Rhythm and rhyme are nicely maintained in this poem! Pain and helplessness are indeed drives one to pray for the mercy of God or the wish for death!

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

I am really grateful to you sir for finding time to read my poem..........

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Bernard F. Asuncion 03 December 2018

Abhipsa, such an uplifting poem................10++++++++++++++

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Abhipsa Panda 03 December 2018

Thanks a lot sir for finding time to go through my poem and appreciating my work

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