Thursday, September 10, 2009

....God Within Comments

Rating: 4.5

Right and wrong reside within
Together side by side,
Divided held apart
Fed with muscle memory,
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Ken e Hall
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Lynn Glover 08 December 2009

Very beautifully written, a theme dear to my heart. I can see the Lord and his love throughout the poem Very nice Your Friend Lynn

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 28 November 2009

very powerful poem......................

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 November 2009

Your are the hard working man with dearth, You are the salt of this teaming earth, With mountains of love and nothing less, God’s will... will surely bless...you act and only know within..he is there always to guide and take you to correct path...lovely pome with some meaning.... i loved it....10 read mine o, lord...prayer..humble submission...you get lost

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 15 October 2009

I liked the imagery with this.

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 14 October 2009

Yes, 'Right and Wrong reside within' the both must be-for there cannot be one without the other-. the duality of life.The dark vs the light-etc.a 10

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Shashendra Amalshan 20 September 2009

Hey.. i do agree with you Ken. God and Satan lies within every man.. If we let our evil side overpower the humane side, we will only end up in self destruction.. We all have to make sure that we let our humane side take charge of our lives.. then we can win the world! ! ! ! this is very well expressed 10++ cheers shan

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C. P. Sharma 19 September 2009

Ken, It is the worship of your heart to this poem beauty imparts. CP

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 16 September 2009

Ken, this is a beautiful piece of write having true spirit of God's existence and goodness and love within the depths of our own souls. Thanks for sharing. Regards Naseer

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Rachel Butler 16 September 2009

Your goodness is a blessing, Your kindness is his dressing. Rachel Ann Butler

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Meggie Gultiano 16 September 2009

You are the salt of this teaming earth, With mountains of love and nothing less, God’s will... will surely bless .............................. And I say..Yes and Amen to this Ken.. A very inspiring piece.

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Kesav Easwaran 16 September 2009

beautiful piece Ken...very much insiprational and soothing to mind...thanks...10

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 14 September 2009

a lovely poem and so much genuine....goodness is his blessing...kindness his dressing beautiful flow...i take this into my favs..

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Matt Mooney 14 September 2009

A poem of encouragement to us all on our spiritual paths.Shakespeare has said in Hamlet 'Like the majority of mortals who pursue the right and do approve it too, condemn the wrong and yet the wrong pursue'. May we pursue what is right and stay with it.

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wael karameh 12 September 2009

I liked ' Fed with muscle memory '...very nice... this is the core of life: a struggle btw good and evil... MAY GOD Bless YOU.... Wael Karameh...

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