Sunday, November 23, 2008

God Will Be Forgotten Comments

Rating: 2.6

If only the world was all love and happiness
Like tides rose and fell
Never a sign of sorrow
The paths of light never narrow
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jathin aka jesuzz
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Deepti Agarwal 28 November 2008

yeah true..all so well versed n written beautifully..

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Deepti Agarwal 28 November 2008

yeah true..all so well versed n written beautifully..

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Reshma Ramesh 23 November 2008

Jasmine is too fragrant Tulip is too beautiful when i found you my friend a flower with too much of the two i believed i found god's ways for he never ceases to surprise us and always listens to my prayers when i prayed for an angel he gave me you a Jasmine too fragrant a Tulip too beautiful i thank him every night for a heart so delightful.......... well penned! ! ! ! ! ! 10! ! !

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Dhanesh Aradhye 23 November 2008

'Only in pain I remember him If only there was no pain I may never pray' ya this is so true.... awesome write...

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Anjali Sinha 23 November 2008

'Jasmine is too fragrant Tulip is too beautiful If only a flower with too much of the two then god will be forgotten.' wowwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! the climax is sooooo beautiful A+ and 10+++ regards anjali (do read some of mine)

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