Friday, August 2, 2019

God Why? Comments

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She said that someday she would leave.
This his ears could not believe.
But then one day she left.
It felt like he had taken his last breath.
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Lamar Cole
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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 August 2019

She said that someday she would leave......./...one day she left../ It felt like he had taken his last breath.....expression of deep love is well executed here. Thank you dear Lamar for sharing this beautiful poem.10

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