Sunday, February 18, 2018

God Where Art Thou? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Into the shallowness of my memories,
Between the wars of two heart halves
I craved for the eternal list of my life,
Which guaranteed my death and
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Takbeer Salati
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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 March 2018

It’s a sublime piece of work! You have chosen one of the most difficult form of poetry and executed it so well! Loved reading your expression: Creeping my accomplishments to the heart/I rose and Died a million times/I could not breathe till I could resonate /Through my shadow/The touch, the feel, the encouragement! I vote it with a 10

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Jazib Kamalvi 18 February 2018

A thoughtful write, Takbeer. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.

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Takbeer Salati 18 February 2018

Thank you Jazib.It would be a pure bliss to dive into your thoughts.

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Chinedu Dike 18 February 2018

Poignant rendition elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation Takbeer. Remain enriched.

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Takbeer Salati 18 February 2018

Thank you. Can't thank you enough :)

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