Into the shallowness of my memories,
Between the wars of two heart halves
I craved for the eternal list of my life,
Which guaranteed my death and
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A thoughtful write, Takbeer. You may like to read my poem, Love And. Thank you.
Thank you Jazib.It would be a pure bliss to dive into your thoughts.
Poignant rendition elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A beautiful creation Takbeer. Remain enriched.
It’s a sublime piece of work! You have chosen one of the most difficult form of poetry and executed it so well! Loved reading your expression: Creeping my accomplishments to the heart/I rose and Died a million times/I could not breathe till I could resonate /Through my shadow/The touch, the feel, the encouragement! I vote it with a 10