I came to your abode God,
my glockenspiel loud to wake you up
my mind in manacle, realized
not your gentle demeanors
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...attune my strings of life to praise your divine aureole..this is my prayer too. You have taken me to the subtlety of yearnings. Great piece here.
Reema, it is really nice to know that the universal poet Tagore inspired you to write this prayer of thanks giving & also invoking Gods divine blessings! The first para reminded me of those Latin prayers sung by the monks in the Catholic church! I am now trying to put the history of Medieval Philosophy in verse! -Raj Nandy
Simply superb dear Rema. I like it more than my pieces. A great job.
fine lines there, eloquent! teaching us the value of prayer and faith in the higher being
God is truly great though it just sometimes happens that we as humans are unable to understand his ways as they are strange. However we still need to not let that faith we have in him get shattered as he created us and will save us from drowning too.
A very touching prayer, meaningful. Some big words like glockenspiel slowed the reading. But is a worth preserving piece. sathya narayana
I like Tagor very much, read his works in my language, he is so spiritual, inspiring, humane, mood and mind lightening author. I am so glad to find a lot of his style in your works, Rema!
Piercing effulgence every heart to surrender at your write
i join the caravan of your praywagon..........with God blessing.brilliant write rema.
A prayer from the bottom of heart with exceptional poetic display
good prayer poem this... calms down disturbing inner turbulence 10
only when we surrender to God, do we get peace of mind and solace, that act of surrendering is not easy. we normally want to be in control.great poem, bringing out your turmoil and longing Rema 10 Mamta
what a beautifully written piece this is? I am speechless at its breathtaking beauty and humility. A perfect hymn to Lord..