God Saved Me....... Comments

Oh, my word. When you boarded that train holding onto your cups of tea instead of a rail- -I thought for sure you were going to fall! I wanted to holler at you to look out, look out. But God looked after you and you did not lose your legs or your arms or your head [well, okay, I guess it could be argued you had already lost your head]. God reaches out and saves us- our job on earth is not done yet. I like the way you wrote a story in verse form- this story fit well into this format. Good work!