Sunday, September 21, 2008

God Save The Flag (Glosa Verse) Comments

Rating: 5.0

**Glosa Verse Poem using:
God save the flag / Oliver Wendell Holmes
Last line in each stanza is from God Save the Flag the rest is my work**
...
Read full text

T.James Becker
COMMENTS
Tom Balch 03 October 2008

I was 25 years a soldier, a writer of poetry longer, take it from me, this is a great piece, well done regards Tom

0 0 Reply
Tia Maria 22 September 2008

Brilliant - reminds me of the 'real stuff' we used to analyse at school - I can see students mulling over this one. Fantastic work TJ - 110!

0 0 Reply

Very nice versed poem.

0 0 Reply
Kris Smith 21 September 2008

Great write TJ branching out lovely to see, very well put together top marks from me friend Chris

0 0 Reply
T.James Becker

T.James Becker

Prescott Arizona
Close
Error Success