God's Wife And Food Comments

He can't have a wife nor food, therefore He cant break into two pieces. Nice words.

well-written, your use of imagery is vivid as well enthralling.. nice poem..

Well written. I love it! It makes me rethink everything in the universe. Everything I know.

Great! fantastic idea.Our universe is made up of a little bit saliva of God, right? Cheers......., Well done! ! ! !

The poem is great being mystical.Well written.

Lines deep in meaning. Well linguistic use. Sounding so abstract but well constructed in meaning. In fact you went metaphysical to prove the omnipotence of God. Good work.

An interesting view... Not a view I personally hold but interesting none the less... A very well written observation...

you know what, my birth day is also on 27th N ovember but its 1998.

ITS REALLY TRUE. NICE ONE. I LIKED IT.

You expressed it beautifully friend.

Scientific poeting hereby...i like the whiff inside it

Full of truth and meaningful. a charm rhymes. you ave wrote this poem with the light. well, well... Regards.

nice.. If God's body had double mass than it has now It could break Itself into two pieces Thus He would have His wife and food