God's Tears Comments

A premature baby Frail, feeble and the most forlorn Born to parents poor and unknown But their love larger........God held you very close to God's chest....... lovely expressions of deep and endearing love full of emotions my dear poet......... they are fine emotions...... that we have to keep and cherish the whole life. thank u. tony

And the father weeping perennial tears For the infant couched on a bed of ice box Denied admission by callous doctors.... //.... The poem creates a poignant atmosphere but has a tinge of optimism, too. Thanks for sharing.

Highly emotional and heart touching poem. Man in realising his greed, forgets to realize what he had realized when he was dependent. Loved reading the poem.

The poem is deeply heart touching with its beauty of rhyme and theme.

What a poem! But love and care That you denied for ever And could not you see In little blue eyes Many little wishes twinkling Like the great morning………10

Many many thanks.........Roseann.......I am humbled........

A very poignant poem, Deepak. It is heart-wrenching, causing tears to flow. These lines touched my heart strings: And could not you see In little blue eyes Many little wishes twinkling. Such innocence and yet life has been taken away! I can definitely see why you named this poem God's Tears, Deepak. Very well written poem! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

Saw the evening Descending silently And through deep shades Walking gracefully...........nice.....like it

Many many thanks..........Rajeshji..........I am humbled.............

How sad. I too heard this story in the news. The best things is that you have captured the grimness in its entirety.

How sad. I too heard this story in the news. The best things is that you have captured the grimness in its entirety.

Many many thanks...........Moore........I am humbled.........

Many many thanks...........Soulful Heart........I am humbled.........

Many many thanks...........Valsa........I am humbled.........

imagery that swished me along its winds....................perched on the quill of your words..

A bud blown off before it could bloom.... and even Nature shedding tears over its sad fate.... Powerfully and poignantly narrated, Deepak! !

Whoa! ! I am truly blown away by this. This is really good. Love it.