God's Storm Comments

(CONT.) 2 - i do like these lines: Stop STOP I SAY STOP The nine years boy starts stumbling And saunters into the Heaven. The boy who died in the terrorist attack saw the God's Wrath And possibly got healed of the earthly wound he got. i'll assume God's Wrath was directed at the terrorists, NOT at the boy! ! ! ! Thanks for the Poet's Notes. bri (:

1. the Dec. showcase poems have already been chosen by me and will be put into the showcase this coming week, or sooner. perhaps i'll use it another month. It does have some 'English problems' in my opinion, but i may still use it because you have been a friend on PH (though not so much as you used to be!) . (: (CONT.)

Nice thought provoking poem...though birth and death are complementary to each other, the premature terrible terror caused death is really pathetic... thanks for sharing