God's Stain Comments

I'm not quite sure your stuff is poetry because there are no easy rhymes and not every line starts with an uppercase letter. I sure do enjoy reading it, though.

I've been trying to unravel, to much bull the past 30 + YEARS I've had it, I'll go along with my favorite cartoon hero when I was a kid. Popeye the sailer ' I am what I am, and thats all what I am ' What is this some kind of race, if so o.k. you win I lose. but I'm here if needed

If God is immortal, perhaps he hasn't bothered to draw up a will? -chuck

I've been following these satirical pieces on church life/God, and they are fun to read and have very clever conclusions. In the way of a suggestion, it has occured to me when reading them, that not much attention has been given to 'lines.' I would jiggle the lines so that they seem more like poetry lines than prose that's been broken randomly. You have a nice little book going here, and I would think these poems would be easy to publish elsewhere. Keep them coming. John.

I agree with Rusty, however an important time for ' God's will, ' is when healing in tramatic occurances, and grief. An excellent way for people to have closure on pain unanswered. I suppose that is why people who love deeply and perhaps lose a child or partner, often turn to god, with the belief of hope and faith to be reunited. Crutch or not. Enjoyed the poem for it's dicipline over excused behaviours and choices people make.

I here you PH. Most Christians think God is constantly micromanaging everything. I personally it is because they don't want to accept responsibility. In my opinion God put everything into motion and said 'have at it kids, I'll see you on the other side'.