Give us this day, our Father says to pray
Do not worry of tomorrow, I will keep you from sorrow
Place your faith in me alone
All your sins I will atone
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Excellent work Linda, if only more people shared your faith the world would be a better place. Best wishes, Andrew
Good poem...nice to know that their still are faithful and religious people out there. Keep up the goo work.
NICE USAGE OF RHYMES... AND A GREAT WAY TO EXPRESS THAT UNDYING FAITH N THE ALMIGHTY...
Awesome poem! I love that you rhymed it soo well! and thx for commting my poem!
Soul-warming poem....thanks for sharing.. ...and thanks for your comment..you noticed me though im just new here.You make me feel i belong.. God bless......
I love this. God truly does promise all of this and more to those who pursue Him. Thank you for this beautiful poem! ! God Bless! ~Lacey~
An enjoyable piece; loved the concept and message of this poem; nicely done! -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory