Sunday, May 25, 2008

God's Promise Comments

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Give us this day, our Father says to pray
Do not worry of tomorrow, I will keep you from sorrow
Place your faith in me alone
All your sins I will atone
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Linda Moore
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Joe Breunig 03 July 2012

An enjoyable piece; loved the concept and message of this poem; nicely done! -Joe Breunig Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Andrew Blakemore 30 November 2008

Excellent work Linda, if only more people shared your faith the world would be a better place. Best wishes, Andrew

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Gutter Box 29 November 2008

Good poem...nice to know that their still are faithful and religious people out there. Keep up the goo work.

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 15 November 2008

NICE USAGE OF RHYMES... AND A GREAT WAY TO EXPRESS THAT UNDYING FAITH N THE ALMIGHTY...

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Chris Newlash 20 September 2008

Awesome poem! I love that you rhymed it soo well! and thx for commting my poem!

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Miriam Maia Padua 16 September 2008

Soul-warming poem....thanks for sharing.. ...and thanks for your comment..you noticed me though im just new here.You make me feel i belong.. God bless......

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Lacey Unknown 19 August 2008

I love this. God truly does promise all of this and more to those who pursue Him. Thank you for this beautiful poem! ! God Bless! ~Lacey~

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Kathleen West 16 August 2008

God's promise....is our hope.. amen.....good write!

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William Jackson 25 May 2008

True! Well said! God is the Life!

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Linda Moore

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