Tuesday, April 28, 2015

God's Plan For Me Comments

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I've been watching this woman on Earth,
She's convinced that I'm cruel and mean,
Her nights are spent in wretched discontent,
But I'm so confused..... should I intervene?
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Lora Colon
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Bri Edwards 10 June 2021

I was here in '15 and '17. This century. : )

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Bri Edwards 25 July 2017

and NOW i'll borrow this for my/our August 2017 showcase. Thanks. bri :)

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Brian Johnston 23 May 2015

A very funny poem Lora, but I don't think you are alone in feeling this way. Do you? If Jesus was fully human and fully God, I can only imagine He must have written a very similar poem 2000 years before you as well. As I count the miracles and the disaster in my life I sometimes suspect that I have lost track of what the truth is, like forgetting where my car keys are. I do know that I have a car though so I guess that is one miracle at least, maybe two, I both have a car and know I have it. The fact that I can't find my keys, well that is clearly God's fault! HA! In any case after a while the number of miracles and disasters too become so large that I have trouble remembering which number is actually bigger. I do have a sneaking feeling though that the miracles are mostly of God's making and the disasters mostly mine. But humans surely should keep in mind that some infinite are infinitely bigger than other infinities. Perspective is everything I suspect. One thing for sure, if Bri knew how to count you would have at least 2 tens already instead of just the one that I am about to give you! Ha!

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Bri Edwards 01 May 2015

She asked for love, so I sent someone, .......... this caused me to burst out with a laugh or two. :) [gee, WHO could that someone be? I know of two likely candidates. no, I guess it is not someone we BOTH know; it must be that guy you mentioned to me in private, …………… in which case I should NOT laugh. SORRY! I wasn’t thinking of him at first.] - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - for some G-damned reason, this is my favorite part so far [and so far ALL the parts have been great! ]: I thought I had this under control, Human behavior is so bizarre, Poor passionate thing, though I clipped her wing She continues to fly.... but not far - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - now MORE laughter over this: Oh, who cares.... I have too much to do! ......yes, Lora, it is true; i AM very busy, and it's only Saturday. i usually only listen to Jewish prayers on Saturdays, but i've made an exception. OH, this poem makes me so humble! (not) i shall NEVER feel sorry for myself again! (not) this goes to my MyPoemList. thank YOU and ME (God) for this great stuff. bri :)

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Amitava Sur 28 April 2015

Very well self analysis, Lora. I agree that many others are suffering much more severely.But I am to say why either they have to or even why should I? Why am I to walk on a bumpy road, the reason being not known to me? Thank you.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

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