Wednesday, October 22, 2008

God's Phone Call Comments

Rating: 4.8

Today as I got out of my house
My phone rang inside
I decided not to pick it up
‘cos then I would be late for work
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sania harris
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Rajaram Ramachandran 04 November 2008

I like this poem very much for its content and nice presentation.

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Miriam Maia Padua 01 November 2008

wow...a miracle story written in poetry....God loves you sania and He is happy on what you wrote...God do miracles in different way...although we cant see Him but he is always with us...guiding us......Keep writing...my big 10 for you....

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Sathyanarayana M V S 26 October 2008

I don't think this is just a story somewhere happend. Such miracles do happen.But what is more appreciable is the way you wrote it. I always thought it is difficult to write a story in poetic form. Some time back I wrote THAT RAINY DAY. I struggled for days to give it a shape. I wonder, are u really 14 years old? ? ? ! ! ! ! Kid! U are a prodigy! U don't know how good u.are.YOU ARE A MAGIC KID..........10++++++++++++++++

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Billy Joe Collins 22 October 2008

nice story well writen

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