Today as I got out of my house
My phone rang inside
I decided not to pick it up
‘cos then I would be late for work
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wow...a miracle story written in poetry....God loves you sania and He is happy on what you wrote...God do miracles in different way...although we cant see Him but he is always with us...guiding us......Keep writing...my big 10 for you....
I don't think this is just a story somewhere happend. Such miracles do happen.But what is more appreciable is the way you wrote it. I always thought it is difficult to write a story in poetic form. Some time back I wrote THAT RAINY DAY. I struggled for days to give it a shape. I wonder, are u really 14 years old? ? ? ! ! ! ! Kid! U are a prodigy! U don't know how good u.are.YOU ARE A MAGIC KID..........10++++++++++++++++
I like this poem very much for its content and nice presentation.