.god’s Own Children Comments

, well sketched, plight of slum dwellers unfolds like watching a movie- deeply touching, simple, excellent flow- yes God's own children, they deserve an answer.

your words project a stong picture with high visual content to let us all see another side of life. well done 10

execellent, your poem has a lucid flow, its as though we are witnessing this stark reality right in from of our eyes

Brilliant work, right way to express feelings of slum dwellers, they need no sympathy but assistance, who is willing for it? a question mark to society, good work

That's again a beautiful poem so clearly depicting the life in slums. Yes, why do people look down up on the poor is difficult to understand.

A powerful affirmation of life in the midst of adversity.Excellent write. Take care. Warm regards, Sandra

Vidyadhar, Very sad Poems, I hope all will change on the best... Thanks for sharing... Kindest regards, Tsira

time erases pain and with richness endows.......trudge on toil non stop undisheartened...things will change