Our Merciful God, with benevolent care
Guards our little lives from above
Sing ye, praise unto the Lord
For He is the mighty reservoir of love
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Greatest is our God's love. His mercy falls on us in abundance. He lifts us up and saves us from falling down. We have unlimited trust on him. With his loving presence he empowers us. Beauty shines and beauty builds personality from inside by his greatest mercy. Greatest bliss we feel continuously. An interesting poem is beautifully penned. This is an outstanding poem...10
Valsa dear, truly, a beautiful prayer. I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for sharing such beautiful thoughts. Full 10+++
The essence of supreme love of God is well captured in the piece. Reads like a chapter of Psalms from the Bible. Lovely poem with good rhyme scheme written with spiritual insight. Thanks for sharing Valsa.
Very heavenly indeed and so inspiring and soul awakening......Valsa.....i think this is one of the the best spiritual poems i have ever read.....10/10
I see His love in the charm of blooms I feel it in the chime of winds I hear it in the song of birds I taste it in the warmth of friends God is a truth, A nice write.
Truly this poem is very good, it is soul soothing; it has so much about God into it too, an enjoyable read! Well done, Valsa George!
Incomparable to be compared, too high to measure, too white than brightest white..and too pure than untouchable pure, His love is always true and the best, just not everybody can see...like the air we cant but what the is what we taking without we noticing_SOul
The old tale will be retold till the last man finds no listener and as the surviving species if any, will bear witness to a hopeless condition and the cries of my sword drawn today will lie unheard then. I am sorry for anyone who has decided upon fantasising things about a merciless and individual centric superpower even in these transparent times of a large chunk of humans living in this world haunted by the evil of poverty, disasters and disintegration. Madam Valsa, my comment was soft and I still feel it must be there in contrast with the usual ones by the privileged ones.Till God`s love is converted into loaves of bread for the hungry millions the same will remain as a notion of fancy for individuals, I assume. Sorry Madam Valsa if you feel it is a sword drawn against a great concept and as a poet with diametrically different stand, I have commented and I have once more displeased you. I could not help it..
To Dinesh, When it comes to the question of God Why in anger draw your sword? As many souls grope in dingy night Let their paths be lit by divine light This prayer, rising up from my heart Reach up to you in Heaven, my Lord!
Oh God! What a poem on Your Love. Reading this poem may be boring to You perhaps. Experiencing Thy love for Valsa is a dream come true! And she has told the world about it. I believe she is not lying here. Dear God, Appear before me in any form, any time, it`s my plea. I am not to resurrect, mind my weak frame too Better late than never, please. Madam Valsa, Hope a day will come that your God reaches out to the ones like me Then shall I unfold my human love to Him And till then I shall remain off your vision
Divinely read. I felt as if I'm reading a psalm! It's more like David's prayer in book of Samuel if I am not wrong. The way he praised god, thanked and worshipped HIM with soul and heart. Not all will recognise the sinfull nature of oneself but those are under HIS grace are sure to accept it, confess the same and invite LORD into their hearts as a Personal Savior! Praise God dear ma'am for we are under HIS grace. In my sinful heart, Oh Lord, you come n’ bide And with your loving presence, lift my load Then my soul, in blissful state will reside And nothing more in life, I shall need!
Great penning of a prayer. A soulful one. Pl. do read my poem God, where are you?
I feel I have said a pray when I read this lovely poem I hope all his love will be repaid you are very much in heart of love when you choose God for your poems...regards
a sigh and a pain, when I was reading a poem.... I would like to hear her laugh again. I would like to see her smile. I would like to sit and talk again For just a little while. here again Valsa also make the same to me.. reading her latest poem Yesterday, Today and all the days to come That’s how God willed it to be.
A poem about God's love is rarely seen on this site. You have written this with such conviction and insight. God's love is unconditional, mans love is conditional. Written with a true heart and received with a grateful one. Thank you for this one and Amen.
Nice prayer coming from a person with a mature mind having command on words. Thank you.
This poem is very beautiful that beholds God's love and this attracts us with beauty and motivation. He continuously gives us love but his love cannot be repaid. When we feel his presence in our devotional mind, we feel his bliss inside deepest core. This is a great write.