God's Kind Of Poetry ….. [sept.2014 Challenge Poem; God & Man; Serious; Personal; A Little Long] Comments

I am sure God is amused by thinking why on earth people are so engrossed in trying to figure out if I exist or not. Don't they have enough of their own problems.

A very interesting, enjoyable, and personal, poem. I'm sure He's getting tired of the mess we're making here, hopefully he doesn't give up on us. Good luck in the Challenge. Darla :)

God is the creator of heaven and earth.We may not see him thru our naked eyes like the wind we don't see but we can feel... God so love the world that He gave his only begotten son to save us from our sins.. God save me from the peak of death...Now i have this second gift of life.... Peace Sir Bri :)

Oh! This is nothing short of blasphemy! But as Eugine has rightly put it, even God will be greatly amused by this write and absolve Bri of the enormous sins he has hitherto committed and still does by way of greed (for ice creams and pastry) lust(?) and more than anything by his act of sacrilege as we see now in this poem and several other sacrilegious statements he has made in the past! Sure he is one of the Earthlings who is satanically trying to prove that God's rules are hollow! Spare this man from eternal fire! !

Yeah, man! If Jehovah, Elohim, Allah, or whoever has a sense of humor He'll (She'll?) say: That Bri done done it again- a funny, witty poem that don't tell it like it ain't! He's a cuss, probably went postal at the USPS, and has committed vast numbers of sins, though venial not mortal, mainly involving debauchery with women and ice cream (simultaneously!) - but I'll let him into heaven anyway- if for no other reason than HE AMUSES THE HELL (OOPS!) OUT OF ME! COME RIGHT IN SINNER- THERE'S COLD BEER IN THE FRIDGE!

Right here, right now, you'll just be spurned, but in the great beyond, you will be burned tis not kismet, twas duly earned! ps. write your poem and practice shutting the cluck up

Right here, right now, you'll just be spurned, but in the great beyond, you will be burned tis not kismet, twas duly earned!