Wednesday, September 17, 2014

God's Kind Of Poetry. Comments

Rating: 5.0

I was peeking from my cave one day
And I saw a man coming this way
I've known for long his name is Moses
I heard it once as he gave his wife roses
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Darlene Walsh
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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 29 August 2015

A good reference work indeed

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Ramesh Rai 08 October 2014

What right have I, a simple small creature To hear the words from such a great speaker I was sure in a moment I would turn to dust Or with pounding in my chest my heart would bust I love the above lines. Poetry emancipate from all challenges.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 29 September 2014

Good morning poet Darlene That was an interesting and new take on the story of Moses and the burning bush. I enjoyed, Loyd

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Abekah Emmanuel 21 September 2014

Oh so you are a contestant too, then no comment for now so I can escape contempt of court. ha! We shall meet on the battle field. Ha! Nice poem.

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Bhargabi Dei Mahakul 20 September 2014

Great words I head from burning bush. Really a beautiful poem.

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