Wednesday, April 1, 2015

God's Gift To Women Comments

Rating: 5.0

How little I care for rubies and pearls,
Or the sparkle of a diamond ring,
But when a man speaks tender words of love,
These are the jewels that make my heart sing!
...
Read full text

Lora Colon
COMMENTS
Chuy Amante 11 March 2016

LIKEWISE Holy Woman! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

0 0 Reply
Brian Johnston 06 April 2015

I really like this poem Lora. The fifth stanza though could be improved from a man's perspective (at least mine) ... So I see each man as a precious gift, No real man desires a life alone, We have but to choose the gift we like best, To win his heart, just open our own.

0 0 Reply
Lorraine Colon 06 April 2015

Your words are a nice variation to my poem. I like them. Let the reader substitute your words for mine if they choose. Thank you, Brian.

0 0
Darlene Walsh 03 April 2015

A lovely poem, with a lovely message. I do believe we are a gift to each other, especially when given freely and unconditionally. But I'm not so sure about 'I love every man, ' some of us are content with just one.

0 0 Reply
Lorraine Colon 03 April 2015

Darlene, this is why I start the stanza with the words With proper intent. The love I refer to in this line is the same as in Love thy neighbor. I am all for loving only one man at a time - preferably only one man for ALL time, with a special love that is reserved for him alone. This special love is too precious and sacred to be given frivolously. Just want you to know I agree with you - thanks for your comment.

0 0
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 02 April 2015

U are soo right and awesome here msn and woman are mutual gifts and we complement each other and neef this other half. Thid is such a creative masterpiece and heartwarming to both sexes ah I laud u fellow poetess. Men are wonderful I agree, we need them for a flutter and flattering gallantry.kudos.

0 0 Reply
Sandra Feldman 01 April 2015

If people really loved each other like this. The world would be nothing but love and bliss. This lovely poem shows how very luck you are. Very pleasant and well written.

0 0 Reply
Kelly Kurt 01 April 2015

A marvelous poem, Lora. Thank you for sharing.

0 0 Reply
Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
Close
Error Success