God's Gift's Comments

Susan, yes, i did have fun with it. Originally written 3 years ago- spent much time editing. You are such a dear soul! Always look forward to your reviews! ! ! ! Waiting on another gem of a write from you! ! ! !

Brian, am so glad you liked my words. i believe paradise is any place of supreme happiness thus we can, indeed, experience it here on earth. Heaven for me - is the blessed home of those who have gone before us- residing with our God. Appreciate you reading and commenting! You are a stellar poet who i enjoy reading!

You had fun with this, didn't you? Playing with alliteration, playing with words- - - - - ] Candles cordial comforting light. That is sooooooooooooooooo lovely and so spot-on. I shall never look at a candle again without thinking of these gorgeous words. Yes, I do believe your soul is Swept with sunshine - my soul sings. Very very nicely done, Theo. Feels good when you nail it, doesn't it? ! ! !

Good use of alliteration in this honest poem celebrating the pure joy of living on God's Earth. Or God's Paradise in Heaven. Perhaps they're one and the same...?