Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Neil Gray
Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Friday, June 9, 2006

God's Foreman. Comments

Rating: 5.0

Drinking at 3 am
in the
Sacred Heart
and Danny
...
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Adrija Dey 09 June 2006

Very good work...................keep it up................Happy Writing

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Angelica Abington 09 June 2006

Once again, you have lived up to all the bragging I do about you...Good one

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John Tiong Chunghoo 09 June 2006

a proud foreman that god is proud of too.

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Not Long Left 09 June 2006

Hi Neil another spine tingling peice from you, felt like I was there raising the glass myself, you really do excell with the style you use. i am wanting to write more, but you poem has taken over all my thoughts best wishes vincent

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Brian Dorn 09 June 2006

Neil, great ending, I can picture the angels scurrying along to keep up. Great write! ! Brian

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What a lovely poem, Neil. They just don't make 'em like this anymore, do they?

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Neil Gray

Neil Gray

Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
Neil Gray
Some hospital I think...can't remember...was very young at the time.
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