Monday, September 12, 2011

God's Children Comments

Rating: 5.0

O! You Kumhar Please help me shape up my life,
as it has been turned into a shapeless kingdom;
O! You Mallah Please help me reach my home,
as my life has become a random destination;
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Vivek Haldar
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Amartya Kalapahar 13 September 2011

Well, its nice but I like these two lines the most- O! You Poet Why are you still writing about them, as this poem of yours will be dumped like your earlier ones;

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Vipins Puthooran 13 September 2011

it's a nice poem..a pious prayer..

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Allemagne Roßmann 12 September 2011

Very well written....equitable distribution of economy counts for smooth functioning of society

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