Thursday, November 5, 2015

God's Breath Comments

Rating: 5.0

You inhale the shadow of darkness
From little pores of this whole universe,
And exhale sacred luminosity
On the surfaces of planets and stars.
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Sanjukta Nag
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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 November 2015

God takes away the sorrows of shadows of darkness and gives us wisdom of light. God's breath is very much eternal that helps us breath too in devotional mood. A nice and interesting poem with excellent composition.10

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Vishal Sharma 05 November 2015

truthful words strike heart directly good job

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Loke Kok Yee 05 November 2015

and see the truth with the light-10

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M Asim Nehal 05 November 2015

Divine and pungent poem.....Loved it...10+++

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