Tuesday, March 7, 2006

God's Boxes Comments

Rating: 5.0

I have in my hands two boxes,
Which God gave me to hold.
He said, 'Put all your sorrows in the black box,
And all your joys in the gold.'
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Arielle Perkins
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Alex In Wonderland 08 March 2006

speachless as I can be, this is one of the best poems i've read... it's simple... it's honest... has a sence of innocense... I just love it, and i will keep it in my favorite poems section of mine... thank you for this lovely poem.. it's inspirational...

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Nick Percowycz 08 March 2006

Any comment I could make, would not express the eloquent beauty of this poem. All I can say is I gave this a 10, but I wish I could vote more than one time! Excellent! God bless you!

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Sugar Bear 07 March 2006

Arielle......Oh my Gosh, you said I wrote good poems, look at you! That was AMAZING! I wonder how long it took you to match those words so..perfectly. I think you have a gift..No. You HAVE a gift. You should publish that one or something, that was Awesome. So yea, that one's too good to risk on the internet where selfish people will still anything so protect this one. You go Girl! P.S. 'Keep writting'; P

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Gary Bryson 07 March 2006

Arielle, That was a nice poem. Life is not simple, but with faith it is not as complicated as those who have no faith would like us to believe. Gary

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