Monday, April 20, 2015

God's Armor Comments

Rating: 4.3

God is my Armor with these emotions that I tend to harbor
Stretched arms out every-time people tries to harm me
Now I'm coming to my senses when life gets too alarming
Fire is the flames that begins the burning deaf are the people
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Laquory Jones
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Tamara Beryl Latham 14 October 2019

Great poem. I read this as temptation of evil that is overcome by a strong belief in God. Your faith is your salvation. Thanks for sharing. : -)

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2018

TWO: A narration poem of the self is the most suitable to present this explicit one, a strong devotional and if I may say you have again created a poem full of brilliance! Myriads of 10 for the vote. You have a good philosophical attitude towards things around you. AND you have read the Bible, that I am sure, since you have written the names from the Bible in the correct context. Thank you for sharing this valuable poesy.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 12 February 2018

ONE: A mesmerizing poem. This poem has all kind of rhymings, at the start, in the middle and oft at the end of a line. As a reader I have read this aloud many times, finally you are in the rhythm of the poem and that sounds like a song, really just try a few times and then you will get that.

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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Insightful utterances set aside for sober reflection. Thanks for sharing Jones.

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Rebecca Navarre 27 November 2017

Very Strong And Powerful Poem! ! ! ! ! With Much Wisdom Shown! ! ! ! ! Faith In God! ! ! ! ! Thank ever So Much For Sharing! ! ! ! ! Many Many 10S! ! ! ! ! ! ! +++++

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Sofia Kioroglou 05 February 2016

Love it! An exquisite piece of poetry really!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 April 2015

God is my Armor with these emotions. Very nicely expressed everything in this poem. Nice devotion of mind.10.

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Laquory Jones 22 April 2015

Thank you

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Kelly Kurt 20 April 2015

An interesting poem, Laquory. Thanks for sharing

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Laquory Jones 22 April 2015

You are welcome

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Laquory Jones 22 April 2015

I am glad you liked my poem

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