God's body has got the best throne
God's body can freely move around
Inside God's light
God has got a chair of artificial light
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best poem by a PH poet that I've read in some time.... excellent, enlightening poetry
this is great I think you should think about getting book together for publishing.
Really an excellent piece on God, great job is done. Very nicely presented God in a poetic manner. 10 for this beautiful work.
aww i love it! ! it's just awesome! i wish i could write poetry like that
A piercing look at the universal questions, in some cases too repitious and could be more concise, I disagree a poem should be self explanatory and if you need a commentary you have not performed well, yet this is a woderful presentation with great potential ' candid as candid can be will bring me many an enemy' Shimon My criticism is meant to be constructive so do not be angry
Very original viewpoint about God and science.Thanks for sharing.A ten from me.
Bravo Asif, well done. Nice job is done. I love it and added my 10 to it.
Nice and poetic expression of awe for our Creator. I would not put any limits on Him No matter how hard our human brain tries to describe the nature of Him, all of us tend to be wrong, because our human mind simply cannot conceptualise the greatness of Him. Once we realise we simply cannot conceptualise in our mind the true Greatness of our God, all (inter-) religious arrogance will melt away. We will realise our perception is only an approximation. We believe it is the best one. But it will become easy to accept that other people have different perceptions which are different approximations.... Wow, Asif, this poem is really thought provoking. A nice piece of art.