Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
Monday, October 17, 2011

God Please Give Me A Break Comments

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God please give me a break
No more pain no mistake.
God please give me solace
No more pain no bad days.
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Asif Andalib
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Hazel Durham 14 October 2012

A heartfelt plea to God to give you peace, great write!

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Tulip Julio Tulipan 13 October 2012

Perfect poem! I love it!

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Heyyou Boy 16 January 2012

A very good poem Asif. Well done

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Jacqui Broad 19 October 2011

I talk constantly to God, but never once thought to ask Him that. Give me a break. Lovely prayer, and lovely poetry. Stay well.

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Jyothsnaphanija Bolla 18 October 2011

No more pain and Darkness, its so simple, stright, extremely appealing poem.

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Efe Benjamin 17 October 2011

Short but concise, truely it is only in God we can find this perfect peace and rest.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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