Monday, March 11, 2013

' God! Please Give Me A Break Comments

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God! please give me a break
Today the world is ruled by hate
If your world was made from love
Why was Lucifer brought upon us..
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Efe Benjamin
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Ransome Adejugbe 27 October 2015

Nice poem Efe Title/intro: perfect Fovourite lines: Christ please come to our aid For how long shall we live in pain Bring paradise to the world you create As your kingdom, in faith we await. What to change: less to nothing Over all assessment: Well penned poem

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Babatunde Aremu 14 March 2013

Amen! Let's keep praying for His kingdom to be establish in the world. Great write!

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