Friday, February 21, 2014

God Played Hockey Comments

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It has occurred to me

That God likes to play hockey

It seems the natural thing to do

Upon his raindrops of frozen dew
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Nick krakana
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Kim Barney 05 January 2015

Nice poem, but in the last sentence I think you meant HUMAN instead of HUMANE. Keep writing more.

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