He made so many of us
When we talk to ourselves
on a busy street and not
talking into a cellphone
...
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It is a very nice piece and you did a good job. It has a light feel to it. It has a nice meter and I think the underlaying message is very cute. (But after reading a few of your other pieces, I think you are truely capable of much more than cute.) Nice work.
An interesting and enjoyable piece; eccentricity seems to be an essential component of the human psyche; perhaps God one day will reveal all of His intentions in creating us; nicely done! -Joe Breunig author/poet, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory