God Must Be Wrong Comments

BRAIN IS PLACED IN THE UPPERMOST PART OF THE BODY. to make sure, all the parts below r controlled by brain feet to run when it s needed legs for woman to make her viewd by men knees to be fold when kneeld waist to measure waistline chest for hearts cage backbone as framewrk of the body arms to hug hpeless people shoulders to cry on neck to move here nd there fingers to touch tender and to grasp better mouth to where food takes place lips to be filled with thruth or lies nose to hold eyeglasses ears to listen carefully eyes to see everything aroun hair to make the face more pretty and then came the head where brain s located... god may not be wrong when he creates human beings but maybe wrong to place their brains.. lucky are the rich people wth brains on their head lucky r the people who r completely mold by their parents for they r also the lucky followers but blessed r the less frtunate who hve brains on their heads tho they hve no money fbut they follow whatever s imposed educate, , , , rich and poor r equal.. education...that s a must for there s no ignorance for educated people all they hve are pride... my comment will end here but tomorrw ill continue again, , , so always give me a space to comment, , , becoz tomorrw s another day, , , mght my brain s more active nd sharpen, , to see more complicated reasons of life, , , , , to the author: : : ill be back.......

amazing poem i'm really impressed well done

A beautiful poem, wel expressed. Enjoyed.

Hi bro, sometimes life can whiz out of control but only if we allow it..when we sense the danger of the crash and burn...that's the moment we learn...We either stop for the red...or we close our eyes to the dangers and learn the hard way. Red lights, ....Just another one out of many for us to get blinded by.......Excellent writing my brother. Best wishes Jon

yusof-I really did like this poem. I think you can be a great poet, if you want to learn a few more fine points of English. Let me know and I will be glad to tell you. Sincerely, kat

Lesson learned..life is short make livable and do not beat the red light! A 10..

nicely illustrative metaphor running throughout...good imagery, and grounding...i liked this one.

superb and realistic imagery, one should learn from this one.

a great write with meaning and very much a pleasure to read. ten ten

You write with great intensity and the message is very strong. Many a man assumes too much credit and places far too little value on the rights of others.