Saturday, May 18, 2013

God Monologue Comments

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I stand here on polished malachite,
My stubby feet encased in gold.
Candles circle me alight,
My arms crossed in eternal fold.
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Aftab Alam Khursheed 18 May 2013

A nice monologue about the trees (polished malachite,) and at the end It seems it takes a tree to make a god. and in 'tween They chopped me down, just to use my wood. very nice

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