God! ! Man Comments

Plea for life is on all way Fraction that meant for survival Forgot the bliss of peace on earth Life on the way of suspicion A beautiful poem on intricacies of life where life has changed from fact to faction.Well expressed well done10/10 Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

There he pray for profit with lust There they plea for the life in turn Contradictions are contemporary always On the wings of time in a queue! beautiful lines thank you

i have a great good friend known as Godman, he is innocent and wise and also little crack.. Profit that never witnessed as due Greed of life whispers inside To invade all with avarice

Man is trying to become God and God is smiling watching this passing show. A nice poem.

Yes so called God-men are now hypocrite playing with the sentiments of innocent people.........a poem on a good concept to be reckoned with........nicely scripted