God, Make My Single Tear Flow Alongwith The Rain Comments

Naseer, I truly love your beautiful prayer-poem. I have always thought prayers and poems should be wedded; they are both heart felt, whether asking for something or only praising..a beautiful effect you've accomplished here.

Hi Naseer - This is a very interesting PRAYER POEM and in its structure and petitions teaches us much abour PRAYER. It is apposite in V 1 that you focus on yourself and ask your GOD to bless your Words - Path - Fragrance - Smile - Eyes - Poems. My Scriptures enourage me to have SELF- ESTEEM so my GOD would endorse V 1! V 2 is more general and focusses on 'The efficasy of Mother's Tears' 'Natural Love' and 'Female Fertility' these items are on all our Prayer Lists. V 3 is very specific - my GOD love it when I bring specifics to His Throne of Grace in prayer. We must learn to pray for footballs - dolls - pensioners - letters - wives and human communication. My scriptures speak of 'Tears and Prayer' and my GOD would - I know - share my appreciation of V 4. Excellent Poem I have scored it a MAX. Yours in poetry - JOHN.

a divine poem indeed! Naseer, you have managed to mingle prayer and poetry in a singularly elegant way. a prayer poem that unselfishly pleades for the well being of others all over the world, to bring his bounty and blessings down upon the earth and a simple request to allow you to find and revel in a piece of yourself rediscovered deep within you. an immaculately written spiritual poetic piece that deserves 10's all around. Jen

a divine poem, the poet pleas the author of life

Dear Sir this poem is a prayer full of devotion to the God whom the author is reflected as a son, a loving child to his father/mother…it is as well like a song in harmony to nature and its melody- the honesty of being human, limited and weak yet loved as a masterpiece of the creation. Like it very much.

Naseer, I echo Kesav's words when he says you find yourself in God in this lovely heartfelt prayer. Bob

A single tear and that rainfall surely a lovely poem deserves a tenner anjali

what a humble beginning....take a ride with a wisdom to cry...., so humble in transgression and wonderful in life giving....the core of the shadow of thanking the giver of everything....my hug greatness of respect to you my dear friend....you win my heart....i like the poem...God bless....a 10 +++++

thanks a lot for your words what amazing words that u have there god bless u

what a beautiful poem! what a heartfelt prayer! Thank you for sharing with us. All we can say is Amen.

'God, a tear from somewhere in my childhood Is floating in both my eyes God, make it flow now along with the rain'... You rediscover your self and your identity with God in these lines Naseer...good composition...thanks...10

Heartfelt prayers; an intimate monologue with God. Wish God answers all those prayers which have good outcome for you and all those you wish for. Ameen

A beautiful poem Naseer. This is such a heartfelt piece and you have shown such compassion for humanity. Thank you for sharing it. 10 love Karin

It's great! ! ! God, cry, make me cry reading this poem

This reminds of of Faiz Ahmed Faiz's 'Dua' aIYE hATH uTHAIN'. Iliked that football for the child. Well thought out and worth the effort, Naseer.10

Impassioned, imaginative, immaculate poetry that stems from the heart and enchants the soul. This poem sings its prayer with originality and humility. A poem to read again and again. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

A lovely poems that speaks to my heart' God make my words a firefly' my conversation a butterfly, my footsteps a path' Make my single tears flow along with the rain- again, I just love it. a 10

I really liked this poem; it's very sweet and gentle and... optimistic. It makes me feel happy. =] 10

A lovely charming prayer, you have reached many hearts with this Naseer, well expressed my friend, 10 Lynda xx

Very touching. Great prayer. Extraordinary. Well penned. Deserves 10+++++++