Sunday, August 12, 2018

God Made The Stars And Showed Me. Comments

Rating: 3.5

God created stars.
They were shining.

Then God carried the stars in a basket
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Dr. Antony Theodore
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Me Poet Yeps Poet 08 November 2018

o Tonyyyyyyy ur so lucccccccccccccccccccyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy u had a RIDE on gods shoulders where was I sleeeping would have loved to ccccccccccccccc bless thee

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Susheela Shiju 05 November 2018

oh dear Tony! you took my breath away! this is so marvelous! you deserve the best as usual10+++

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 August 2018

God looked into my eyes./Seeing the joy in my eyes/God cried. Tears of joy..........sparkling expression! A sublime piece of poetry! (10)

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Aqua Flower 12 August 2018

Beautiful imagery about God and the innocence of children. We are all children of God and we should always see the star he puts in our sky! Very lovely and soothing write!

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