Thursday, August 29, 2019

God Knows Best Comments

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If God someday ask me
Were you a good son
I can say: Yes Lord
Why?
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Ryson Dsouza
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Anil Kumar Panda 02 November 2019

A very nice poem. you can't make happy all the people all the time. But trying it is good. Enjoyed the poem thoroughly. Thanks for sharing.

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Ryson Dsouza 11 November 2019

Thanks for the comments.. i Have edited a bit.. Cause i wish you see the Positive side

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You had been good son, brother, employee, friend but could not Satisfy the wife, sometimes, somewhere, somehow, Every expectations cannot be satisfied, every satisfication cannot be expected.nice poem

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Ryson Dsouza 03 September 2019

Thanks alot for your valuable comment... I sometimes feel broken, , , But writing gives you hope Every Expectation cannnot be satisfied... Your words are so true...

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