God Knows Comments

A well articulated train of thoughts nicely encapsulated into a good piece of poetry. Well done Galina. Thanks for sharing and do keep it up. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.

The speaker has a relationship in this poem with two men - one is another human and the other is God. Both relationships are vexed. With the human man, she must provide a lot of help. Apparently he is atisfied with his illusions and blocks out the world (the box on his head) and expects her to guide him. YOU WANT ME TO BE A MIRROE/AND WEAR A BOX ON YOUR HEAD. She, in contrast, is completely transparent - nothing is hidden. When the man fails to communicate with her, she turns to God, confident he sees sees her soul truly.

So long I believe your feeling And fancy - you know me best Tonight you don't wanna hear me And God came to be my guest A beautiful love poem carrying lot of ambitions and doubts about lover.A masterpiece.Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan