THE god is wearing black
he is not coming back
he is gone
he is gone
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Yep I too feel like this sometimes and I ask 'Are you there'? nice piece Jai and u deserve ++10 regards anjali (read mine Are you there)
This is surely a great piece. Sarcasm, surrealism in right proportions make this a bitter sweet read. I very much concur with ur thoughts. I wrote on this subjects two poems: I AM GOD and I CHANT, CHANT AND CHANT. But your poem just touches the summit of excellence..........my heartufl votes.....10. Thanks for this piece.
A different feel and read Jai You have the talent to flourish keep writing All the best! ! ! ! ! !